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Friday 9 May 2014

Time arrives

Time arrives

It looks like New York. I'm so excited. I could here the cars engine on the motorway broom! Broom!! Wow! Here we are. I will check in said mum. You guys wait here. It looks like a house.

Mum what number are we? 106. That's a large number! The room looked amazing, there were flash equipment around the room.

Morning knock knock! Who's that at 6.oclock. Oh room service. What are you doing here. Room service.i looked like I had a big frown face on. Could you come back at eight thirty. Because I need some sleep.Who was that caro? Room service at six in the morning just go back to sleep. That always happens. Now who's this at the door...

3 comments:

  1. great similies and launguge featers
    jorja

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  2. Great language features

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  3. Nice Story Caro my favourite languge features is It looks like New York.

    Mackenna

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